good pi luke you had heaps of information and you eel trap looked great but next time you could of spook a little slower but apart from that great job and it was good that you made having the lollies far. Sara,Sophie
Great P.I luke your a eel trap designer in the future. Next time you could learn your speech a bit better. good catch your fish were pretty nice maybe next time try catch some bigger ones.
exellent p.i we never knew you could make an eel trap. if we were trying to catch an eel we would never give up!! we think you could have done better at remembering it off by heart.
Great PI Luke! :) You spoke clear and loud. We think eel's are gross and slimy but we don't think catching one is as gross! Maybe next time have some pics on the other pages and not just at the 'pics' page. -Hannah and Linda
Great PI, Luke. Your net looks totally professional! It certainly looks good enough to catch a few eels (please let us know when you have your first catch). Next time you do a PowerPoint, don't read out words people can see on your slides. Instead, have lots of pictures and maybe only a few words. Tables of contents aren't really necessary either, unlike a book or booklet. Great work on the most important part though - your magnificent net!
Hey luke.nice worki on the PI but I'm a bet scard that I ate an electric chococlate fish.The bit I liked about the PI was that you showed us your trap and brougt it to school. next time maybe u could bring in an eel and show us.have you ever cuogth a Conga eel cuse its brain boboing that it is the biggest eel out of 400 types of eels.
Cool PI it was really cool how you made an actual eel catcher. Next time you could look at the audince when you talk.
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Super Awesome P.I Luke ,Best P.I yet. Everyone got lollies and you made an awesome net, nothing to improve on and once more awesome!
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome PI Luke. We liked the net and the chocolate fish but next time you could speak a bit clearer.
ReplyDeleteCaitlin and natalya.
I like how you made that you made that net bummer you catch no eles
ReplyDeletenext time you should try read some off by heart.
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good pi luke you had heaps of information and you eel trap looked great but next time you could of spook a little slower but apart from that great job and it was good that you made having the lollies far. Sara,Sophie
ReplyDeleteGreat Pi Luke
ReplyDeleteYou explained the things that you needed well and you did well to bring it in as it was such a big thing.
Next time hopefully you get an eel!
Alana and Jaime
you spoke clear .you need to have more info
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Great P.I luke your a eel trap designer in the future. Next time you could learn your speech a bit better. good catch your fish were pretty nice maybe next time try catch some bigger ones.
ReplyDeleteBy Camryn,Sam,Thomas and chhaazzyy boy
exellent p.i we never knew you could make an eel trap. if we were trying to catch an eel we would never give up!! we think you could have done better at remembering it off by heart.
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Great P.I Luke you picked an interesting subject
ReplyDeleteNext time.... know your spech better From Cindy and Rebecca
Great PI Luke! :)
ReplyDeleteYou spoke clear and loud. We think eel's are gross and slimy but we don't think catching one is as gross! Maybe next time have some pics on the other pages and not just at the 'pics' page.
-Hannah and Linda
awsome pi!!! luke because you made a net that workes nothing to improve. agane awsome luke!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat PI, Luke. Your net looks totally professional! It certainly looks good enough to catch a few eels (please let us know when you have your first catch). Next time you do a PowerPoint, don't read out words people can see on your slides. Instead, have lots of pictures and maybe only a few words. Tables of contents aren't really necessary either, unlike a book or booklet. Great work on the most important part though - your magnificent net!
ReplyDeleteHey luke.nice worki on the PI but I'm a bet scard that I ate an electric chococlate fish.The bit I liked about the PI was that you showed us your trap and brougt it to school. next time maybe u could bring in an eel and show us.have you ever cuogth a Conga eel cuse its brain boboing that it is the biggest eel out of 400 types of eels.
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